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Dumbles
August 19, 2003, 08:18 PM
You are
New to me
But wait and see
I'll strip down naked
To my skin
It's all about the clothes
You're in
Until they're shed
Revealing skin

You are
Good to me
But wait and see
I'll strip down naked
To my flesh
Flesh that's flayed
Just tastes
The best
Shedding skin
Revealing flesh

You are
Sweet to me
But wait and see
I'll strip down naked
To my bones
Stark and white
Lean and honed
Leaving flesh
Revealing bone

You are
True to me
But wait and see
I'll strip down naked
To my soul
Dark and dreary
Sullen and old
Discarding bone
Revealing soul

And will you stay
If I am naked
Will you smile to see
Right through?
Will you mourn
My last breath taken?
Stripping scares
Life out of you...

Weiß
August 19, 2003, 08:34 PM
I'd like to say Well Done to the girl (huh huh hurl) *MOST* likely to,
And when you shine in the public eye, my dear
Please remember these days...

Dumbles
August 19, 2003, 08:42 PM
> I'd like to say Well Done to the girl (huh huh hurl) *MOST* likely to,
> And when you shine in the public eye, my dear
> Please remember these days...

Oh, how sweet of you! It's nice to get a gentle pat on the back after you've taken off your clothes. Thanks!

Weiß
August 19, 2003, 08:45 PM

Dumbles
August 19, 2003, 08:53 PM

Weiß
August 19, 2003, 09:03 PM

davidtwigg
August 19, 2003, 09:09 PM
Women's bodies are so well designed, aren't they? Much unlike us men. Your poem was excellent tara, well done again.

Dumbles
August 19, 2003, 11:16 PM
> Women's bodies are so well designed, aren't they? Much unlike us men. Your
> poem was excellent tara, well done again.

Yes, I have to agree. Women's bodies are well designed. Men can be quite appealing, too. Especially if you happen to be a woman with a penis fixation...hmmmm...

Anyway, thank you, David. I'm glad you liked it. I always hesitate before putting anything non-pornographic on the board. Now how fucked up is that?

GenderNectar
August 19, 2003, 11:35 PM
> Your poem was excellent tara

Huh? Dumbles -- your name is Tara too? Why didn't I know that? Man. Shows how much I pay attention around here huh? Derr.

Dumbles
August 19, 2003, 11:37 PM
> Huh? Dumbles -- your name is Tara too? Why didn't I know that? Man. Shows
> how much I pay attention around here huh? Derr.

It's not something that was posted here on the boards. It was posted in my journal.

General Decay
August 20, 2003, 07:33 PM

Dumbledore
August 21, 2003, 02:03 PM
Thank you.